#3
You look stupid as hell, TS. I hope you're embarrassed of yourself in 10 years.
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#4
Quote by JustRooster
You look stupid as hell, TS. I hope you're embarrassed of yourself in 10 years.

While this is quite mean... I agree.
#8
Quote by macashmack
While this is quite mean... I agree.


My favorite football team had just lost when I wrote that. I was a bit salty. I don't mean to be so hard on the boy.
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#10
TS, you should definitely never wear those pants again, though.
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#11
Well its not my cup of tea but, if that's what you want to do, I think you are headed in the right direction...
#12
Keep it up, work on your pitch, watch your vocal keys. Tune up that voice with a tuner to grasp off note keys. You're playing and singing, that's very good.

The lyrics were not my cup of tea. They were very whiny along with run on sentence styled lyrics. I know bridge and chorus is traditional, but it helps sort the song out.

Don't listen to haters keep it up and play.
Most of the important things


in the world have been accomplished


by people who have kept on


trying when there seemed to be no hope at all
#14
We've all had embarrassing fashion periods, I have. I listed to Nu Metal in the 90's, and had the baggy trousers and chains to prove it.

But someone seems to have vomited a literal version of the Dummies Guide to Boy Bands on this kid. TS, as a general rule, unless you've got the guns you shouldn't wear a vest like that.

I'm pretty sure that the girls at your school would love those songs though, but you won't win any plaudits on this site.