vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
5,308 IQ
#1
how do you push it out?


often,
I imagine grabbing you by the temples
and popping your shame
like an overgrown zit,
your veins left indented
on your bald head...


just wait as the throbbing resides.


where do you go when the ghost commands you to stop hiding?


away?

where the fuck have you been, anyway?
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it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




e-married to
theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

Last edited by vintage x metal at Sep 25, 2013,
SubwayToVenus
Registered User
Join date: May 2009
2,301 IQ
#2
i've always known you were brilliant at spacing, but when i read those last three three lines in succession as i scrolled down the page, it was revelatory.

well done, saadia. that last line sticks
here, My Dear, here it is
vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
5,308 IQ
#4
Thank you so much. Thank you.

It is awesome that you guys still read me. It has been so difficult to write lately.
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




e-married to
theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

JustRooster
Professionally Crabby
Join date: Jan 2005
7,261 IQ
#5
You've had better. I like you when you're not so obvious.

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Thats too bad, I was under the impression I was arguing something profound