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I really think this song is one of my best


"Prisoner"

Sentence me all of this time
Make me pay for all my crimes
Defeat me
Defeat me

Be the warden in this Hell
Lock me up inside my cell and
Beat me
Beat me

Make me stand before a judge
Tell my victims to hold a grudge
Deny me
Deny me

Strap me into that wooden chair
Let’s not break that ice cold stare
Remove me
Remove me

I’m a prisoner of your life, baby
But she’s the only one who’ll save me
From who I am
I’m a prisoner of your life, baby
But she’s the only one who’ll save me
From who I am

Forgive me father for I have sinned
Quit believing you can live
Without me
Without me

Mother may I run away?
Why’d you put on this new face?
To spite me?
To spite me?

There’s no escape from where I lay
May never see the light of day
Beyond me
Beyond me

Took a risk and dodged the blame
Hold me close now to the flame
Before me
Before me

I’m a prisoner of your life, baby
But she’s the only one who’ll save me
From who I am
I’m a prisoner of your life, baby
But she’s the only one who’ll save me
From who I am

I’ve been the one
Behind the gun
One too many times
My outlaw days
Just a whiskey haze
I guess it caught up to me
Lived by the sword
I run no more
I sit and wait to be
A man cut loose
Free from this noose
But you had to settle your scores
Outlaw ways
Who’s to say
I wouldn’t do it all again…

I’m a prisoner of your life, baby
But she’s the only one who’ll save me
From who I am
I’m a prisoner of your life, baby
But she’s the only one who’ll save me
From who I am

Beaten down but never sold
How the hell could you be so bold?
To fight me
To fight me

Rusted chains drag down the halls
Scratching words into the walls
About me
About me

I’m a prisoner of your life, baby
But she’s the only one who’ll save me

Outlaw ways
Who’s to say
I wouldn’t do it all again
I wouldn’t do it all again
I wouldn’t do it all again
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#3
I thought it was really cool how you made defeat and beat rhyme in the first couple of lines and I thought it would be cool if you repeated that motif and had the first word of the repeated word rhyme the last one. Otherwise these are really cool lyrics with a really cool theme. I'm not one hundred percent sure what all of your phrasing is, but it all looks sounds really cool. Interesting theme too.