#3
Hey dude! Thanks for listening! And yeah it does lol. but I dont mind I'm not trying to make this a song we recorded it and then i did all the trippy electronica stuff for fun and thought it was cool! Its not meant to be perfect.. and yeah Ill listen to yours now!

Cheers!
#4
Pretty cool track, very chilled out. I like the name a lot too. The talking was actually cool. I think you hit the synths and effects well, the drums are cool too. The only thing I would say is missing is I was waiting for you to take it to another level. Get more upbeat with it, move the song to a different feel. Otherwise, good work. I think its a solid foundation for something

heres mine

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=31955766#post31955766