#2
Guitar tone is very good, quite similar to the original. I prefer my tone to be a bit brighter/sharper, but it depends on your preference, this certainly suits the music anyway. Lead sounds very nice and is well executed. The playing is very tight throughout in fact. Overall, you've done a good job.

C4C? (another Iron Maiden cover)
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1618021
#3
Tone of guitar is so clean. Like "MetalCommand" says it has to be sharper and brighter. But there is no problem with playing.

But when it comes to Vocal. Sorry but vocals are too bad. First of all you are singing with your talking voice. And you are not even hitting any notes.