Well I liked the first half, the tones were really nice and the playing made good use of them. Had a very 'floyd' feel, made me think of the division bell in particular. The second half wasn't so good; it didn't really fit with the first half, i don't think the hooks are strong enough to repeat so often, it really needed a full band and the rhythm guitar (I think) had a lot of playing noise in it. Definitely something worth developing though,

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1618966