The file is kind of weird in that it randomly skips back like there is a repeat when it does not show any.

I liked it.

The sections starting at 10 could have been used again in my opinion, that might have been my favorite part of the whole song.

Would you plan to have vocals over this? The weird little dissonant bit like at 34 seemed needless to me. It felt like you added it just for the sake of adding it in a weird way. I think you could almost do without it entirely.
loved it... i thought the dissonant chords added nice contrast... i would leave them. Good start of a song you have going.