#1
Hey UG, I'm pretty new to writing lyrics as I only gave it a serious try recently. I'm just looking for some feedback and constructive criticism on the lyrics and their flow. I'm more than happy to offer feedback in return if you leave a link.
I do think the chorus is a bit weak, but let me know what you think.

(Verse)
Everyday flashed before our eyes
But still it fades from our lives.
Why can’t we come to terms
With the fact that they still burn?
I ask you to do something
But you say no, it’s not my turn!

(Chorus)
Desolation, frustration, can’t make sense of this situation.
Creation, revelation, do we need some inspiration?

(Verse 2)

Charities built for those who are in need,
Yet still it hides our corporate greed.
What do we need to learn
So that they’ll no longer burn?
You ask me to do something
But I say no, it’s not my turn!

(Bridge)
I’ve long had this dream
Soon we’ll ring the warning bell.
The cost is rising as they scream;
Help us for we cannot help ourselves.

(Chorus 2)
Desolation, frustration, can’t make sense of this situation.
Creation, revelation, all we need is some inspiration.