#2
I think this will sound great if recorded properly.

However, if I'm looking at this composition in the context you provided- a musical task given by a teacher, wouldn't this be too simple?
#3
Quote by Aralingh
I think this will sound great if recorded properly.

However, if I'm looking at this composition in the context you provided- a musical task given by a teacher, wouldn't this be too simple?

Thanks for the reply.

He told me to make something 'normal' and think musicaly about the piece.
I overheard what he told others in the last lesson and they lacked a memorable theme/ melody.
My piece is simple, but i think with some adjusting I can use the melody starting at 3:37 as the main theme, since it's easy to sing along and catchy imo.
What do you think?
#4
Quote by toine
Thanks for the reply.

He told me to make something 'normal' and think musicaly about the piece.
I overheard what he told others in the last lesson and they lacked a memorable theme/ melody.
My piece is simple, but i think with some adjusting I can use the melody starting at 3:37 as the main theme, since it's easy to sing along and catchy imo.
What do you think?


I think that it will suffice, while not overly memorable- it does very much fit the theme. Furthermore, any memorable melody you would come up with will certainly resemble those that are already well known in the culture, I personally prefer to make good melodies, but also somewhat unexpected ones.

I assume you wanted me to respond earlier, but I don't check UG often, either way, I think it's fine the way it is.
#5
I think I would have abused a C with a minor 3 major 5 major 7 and 9, but drop the c cuz you cant use a c. then drop it down to Bm7 and make it brutal. But this was actually pretty cool i like it.