I think you need to reduce the 8-9 kHz hiss in the vocals somewhat.

The title of the song isn't particularly inviting, although the song itself is quite nice.
hahaha sorry about the title. I actually don't know how to reduce the 8-9 kHz hiss, i'll google it!
You EQ it...
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