#3
Similar to older Arctic Monkeys style music. Watch the pitch on the vocals....they would sound better if recorded differently, I can hear some popping on b's and p's and overall it sounds like the vocals are just way out in front of everything.
#5
I'm presuming this is your group Hushunika?

I like it. Some constructive crit: The snare needs more crack. Try triggering it in a DAW and see what you think.

Try doubling the guitar on 'She Wouldn't Let Him Go'. Sounds thin during the chorus and needs guitar in the left channel. Pan the lead part to near the center slightly right. Just some ideas take it for what it is worth!