#2
Hi


All guitars sound ok to me but I listen only to punk rock so my opinion isn't that important.
Lyrics are great. I love your voice as well, it would be nice if vocals sounded a little bit louder cause many times I can't distinguish them.
You sure do a good with the drums.

I know I didn't help much, I heard some other staff of yours that I commented.
Keep on the good job!
#3
Hey man, I really enjoyed listening to that!!!!! The vocals sound like they are sung by the alice in chains singer!!!!! Very sick man! Loved it!! I love how this song builds, it just gets better as it goes, the composition aspect of it is amazing. Overall great song
#5
12 strings? Love the sound! Agree that it sounds like Alice in Chains.

If I'm not mistaken, you recorded a drum part and a tambourine part? I started doing this with my band and (to my surprise) it really fills up the sound. However, I would lower the tambourine and bring up the drums. I think you'll get the same effect but with more emphasis on the drums. After all, during a live show you'll have drums and no tambourine, right?

Thanks for reviewing my song as well:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1623779