You've got the right intervals, but you are a few semitones flat. Otherwise, gorgeous arrangement! You should try to find a way to incorporate the bassline.
Q: Favourite Pink Floyd song?
A: The one where they get wicked high and play Emin and A for an hour.

Thank you for your response, you're right I don't play it in the original C major. I thought it sounded sweeter in F with D fingerings. Playing it in D also made it so much easier to play basslines, mabye I didn't play them strong enough. I play the bass like this: