Hi all! Been working on this one for a little while now but figured I could some help/advice with the songwriting front. It's somewhat of a Black Sabbath style song. I have the introduction pretty much written and then a few subsequent parts.

I wanted to get some peoples' opinions of the song and what could be changed or added. The initial heavier riff that kicks in is going to be part of or the whole of the chorus later on in the song just to say.

Many thanks for reading/listening and I look forward to the comments!

I've attached the Guitar Pro file in both .gp5 and .gp4 formats as well as a .midi file
Iron Woman.gp4
Iron Woman.gp5
Iron Woman.mid