#3
Guitars sound great, and the growled vocals work really well for this song. I'm not so keen on the first verse, but maybe it's just the distortion on the vocals I don't like - It sounds like you're trying to hide imperfections in your voice, rather than enhance the song. The chorus bit is really good though. So is the bridge.

The vocals could be improved in one or two places, but other than that, it's awesome. Keep up the good work.

My music is a little different, but I'd appreciate a crit all the same

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1624189