#1
So here's something I wrote in music class at school today... I didn't manage to do the group-work we were supposed to do, so I got to write something instead. I simply decided to write about the anxiety preventing me from doing what the others did. Not sure if that worked out or just failed completely. My mind enjoys telling me the last one's right.
Just be honest, and if there's any grammar mistakes in there, please let me know where? I want to improve my English.
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Cut the Ropes

Someone bound my chest too hard
tight around the pole and me
No matter how much I’d like
to go I wouldn’t walk forward

My feet’s another part
they’re controlled by the scars
I’ve got nothing to say
Nothing to say
Independence from myself
is something unknown
If I walk now I’ll fall down

In my world I don’t exist
‘cause everything’s worth more than fear
Inside the ropes my own blood runs
‘cause I’m the one that ties me down

My feet’s another part
they’re controlled by the scars
I’ve got nothing to say
Or maybe I do
Is it all just coward me?
I’m something unknown
If I walk now I’ll fall down

All eyes on me
The ropes get too tight
I know that I’ll fall
I know that I’ll lose
I know that I’ll fail
I know that I’m not
worth anything more than
these ropes

Cut the ropes or make my fear
#2
The ropes set the scene, but I think you're trying to make them tell a story when they can't. I know this song isn't supposed to literally be about rope, but that's how it comes off.
#3
Quote by JustRooster
The ropes set the scene, but I think you're trying to make them tell a story when they can't. I know this song isn't supposed to literally be about rope, but that's how it comes off.


Okay. Thanks.