#2
Could use some vocals... Maybe something in the style of Bon Iver.. or even John Martyn could work very nice... Love the composition.. but maybe that build up thing could be played with even lower dynamics; build up treating it like a tender child to break it up and play it full force and fade out with those beautiful notes. Good job mate.

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