#2
Guitar tone is far too weak, needs more bite and more bass for rhythm and needs much better lead tone.
Overall Sound is more like deathcore than metalcore.
Vocals are far too prominent in the mix and drown out everything else.
This is just listening to "welcome to the progression".

I don't want to offend you or dishearten you but I'm giving you an objective view. I don't really like metalcore or deathcore for that matter so I won't comment on songwriting.
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#3
Individual instruments sound well to me, but the overall mix and how they blend with each other I found lacking as well.