#1
First song on my profile called Overture/song1/song2/song3 - http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Betaciao/

Working on a concept album to be done by the end of this month. I've been hammring out all the rough ideas as soon as they come to me and then plan on going back and doing everything nice and neat once I have the layout set. This 10 minute piece comprises of an overture which will be longer, and 3 songs. I know things could be tighter, but lemme know what you think.
#3
.1:38 caught me by surprise, it was really nice. Nice flow. But I think the problem is that there isn't enough differentiation between songs. This is something I feel about Radiohead too so it may not be that bad, it might be just me. Keep going!

Also if you want, here's a recording I did. Just because I commented on your stuff don't feel you need to do it against your will: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1625855
Last edited by Minicaxotinho at Dec 7, 2013,