#2
moving to Singing and Vocals
But boys will be boys and girls have those eyes
that'll cut you to ribbons, sometimes
and all you can do is just wait by the moon
and bleed if it's what she says you ought to do
#4
You need to train your voice as it is really raw and untrained now :P

- For better pitch control you can practice scales.
- You have that shy/out-of-breath sound: Support better and "breath" through your stomach rather than your chest (as this will reduce straining in chest and throat) and finally, try to relax as much as possible.

Good luck!
#6
Your not bad but your not all that amazing either you could probably get alot more out of your voice with some lessons.
#7
You have quite some way to go with working on your technique before that song is presentable. Singing in front of people at this stage would not be a good idea - you would probably be laughed at.
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#8
Quote by HomerSGR
You have quite some way to go with working on your technique before that song is presentable. Singing in front of people at this stage would not be a good idea - you would probably be laughed at.

He wouldn't get laughed at. First off his voice isn't that bad and second of all most of the time people respect performers just for getting up and performing.
#9
With the upmost respect,

seeing that you took a courages leap and posted something for the world to hear,

what you really...really need to work on is your pitch/ear. Your off key quite a bit which makes the rest hard to judge.

as said..."with the upmost of respect"
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