#1
my first song and im not very good at writing :P so be gentle haha i got the guitar part for this song wrote out all ready verse chorus solo and all maybe if i learn to sing il post it
chorus
il be fine girl
just need some time girl
just need some time away

take your time girl
loose my mind girl
its hard to stay away

verse 1
sleeping days
rocking all night
making waves
living my life
come with me
along for the ride

guitar solo

verse 2
come with me all you people
let me hold you in my hand
maybe then they'll understand

chorus
il be fine girl
just need some time girl
just need some time away

take your time girl
loose my mind girl
its hard to stay away

sounds cheesy without my guitar now that i read over haha
#3
Quote by madcaleb165
I enjoyed it. What kind of chord progression do you use?

in the chorus im going Gb-E-D but im doing it in a c shape and plucking out notes instead of just straight strumming because then it just sounds bland haha