#1
If your demise was never untrue
then who in their right mind would protect you?
This city weeps for no one,
and these eyes can only flock the overseen;
these words will haunt what can never be reached.

Only the ambiance of desolation can control you
and who you are exists no longer.
Last edited by Bleed Away at Dec 15, 2013,
#2
This echoes past pieces and fantastically takes them to a new peak. My only question is why the capitalisation of "Your" but not "you"?
#3
Quote by doubtfulsalmon
This echoes past pieces and fantastically takes them to a new peak. My only question is why the capitalisation of "Your" but not "you"?


Thank you! I really miss writing, and it's great that I am returning to it again. Yeah, "your" shouldn't be capitalised (I wrote this on notepad and, for some reason, the capitalisation skipped my eye).