#2
really cool melodies and the song overall, but my only gripe is the drums. i think during the verse they feel lazy or something, like they are slowing the entire song down. maybe if the verse was just a march-type of shuffle, strictly on the snare, that would help out a lot, but thats just me.
#3
celitus,
The vocals are good, just slightly pitchy at times. If no pitch correction was used, I bet Melodyne could get it spot on. Audio quality is good. I like the synths & the intro. At around 1:30 the timing sounds kind of awkward to me somehow. Other than that, I liked the guitar playing. Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1627184