At first the tone was brilliant but then when I saw the whole video I couldn't focus except on one thing , ur vibrato !!
U really neek to work on them , it will make things much smoother .
And there was some parts that was out of tune , u gotta take care of that later ... Overall that was a good one but as I told u , with a good vibrato things would have gone much better

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