#6
This is awesome! Once 1:50 hit and you started singing higher, I got into it! The arrangement is solid. This is a critique, honestly the only thing that I could pull out is at the beginning your voice goes a little nasally in a couple spots, but that's not even a bad thing in your case, it's your voice and I think this is good.
If you don't mind a C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1630002
Keep it up brother!