#3
Wow, the intro is really nice sounding, I like it a lot. I wish the distorted guitars were a little clearer, but from what I hear I really like the writing of it. The small breaks in the middle and near the end were good. Drums sound pretty decent to me. Overall I think its a pretty good song. Nice job

I gave the old version a listen and they are reaaaaally different, it's like night and day? Maybe I listened to the wrong one, if not when you said re-imagined you really meant it haha

C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1627065
#4
Quote by aaron aardvark
denfilade,
Intro sounds quite pleasant: Playing is pretty tight. Too much distortion around 1:30 (and similar) in my opinion. Drums are good. For me the intro & the mellow middle part were the best parts. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1627184


Awesome, thanks for listening! Yeah, getting that perfect guitar tone has never been my strongpoint, so I'll keep working on it! I shot a post over on your thread too!

Quote by JDawg00100
Wow, the intro is really nice sounding, I like it a lot. I wish the distorted guitars were a little clearer, but from what I hear I really like the writing of it. The small breaks in the middle and near the end were good. Drums sound pretty decent to me. Overall I think its a pretty good song. Nice job

I gave the old version a listen and they are reaaaaally different, it's like night and day? Maybe I listened to the wrong one, if not when you said re-imagined you really meant it haha

C4C?

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1627065


Thanks for listening JDawg! Yeah, something I noticed when listening to your stuff is that my track doesn't have those high frequencies for that crispness and clarity, so I'll definitely keep that in mind! And yeah, the old one, titled 'Flying' also? I tried to keep the structure and melodic themes the same, but different style altogether!
#5
Yeah, the intro is really good! I really like that clean guitar tone and the overall feel of the song. The small breaks are nice. As for potential improvements, I would maybe have liked some more melodies played by the lead guitar. I did not really like the tone of the lead guitar, so that's also something that could be improved.

Check out my song at:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1627852
#6
Very nice intro! Really liked it. Especially the right-panned guitar. Reminds me a lot of some stuff I was trying to write with my looper last fall. Definitely getting nostalgic here. When the drums come in, I can definitely hear what you're going for, but the rhythm guitar takes over way too much leaving the lead with a weak sound due to the low volume.

As said before, the breaks a very nice, and I really did enjoy the song as a whole. Could definitely imagine some nice vocals on top of everything. Really looking forward to future work from you!

Check out our similarly titled song: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1631043
#7
Intro sounds really nice, all guitars have their place, if you know what I mean. Loud part afterwards is cool, but a bit too muddy and bassy (maybe use that synth but play it an octave higher?). The riff around 1:45 is cool and sounds a lot better, no need to change eq here. Riff around 3:00 sounds great too and not too muddy either. By the way, the right-panned guitar around 3:50 reminds me of Boris' Flood album, which you might like. :P
This is a pretty good song. I think I would've liked it even better if there were more/longer mellow parts, to add contrast with the louder ones.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1631361 Thanks!