Looking for feedback on my song both from a compositional and mixing perspective.
After watching youtube videos on getting a decent mix, Ive gotten a fair bit better but Im still not getting the sound I am looking for.

Im trying to get a brutal, hard hitting sound but I am unsure how to go on about this. Ive tinkered with the EQ and compressors but I feel im not getting anywhere. Any advice or criticism is welcome. I will critic your work if you do mine.

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