#1
Hi,
My name is Amir from Tel-Aviv and I LOVE music!
I'm here to here your opinion about my music (good and bad) and hope to learn from it.

Here is my new song (and clip), First time i'm uploaded to youtube.

hope you like it

Lyrics:
All she said you and me
All she said meant to be
All she gave me reason to bealive
When she said she will never live

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

All she said hold me tiet
When we stay up all night
All she said trust in me
All I have Is what she said to me

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The wind you feel I feel it to
The sky you see Is not just for you
We are on the same road Don't turn your head away
Maybe some day....

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

Tnx
#2
How many views and not one comment

people please comment, It will help me alot, tnx
#3
you should change the Title that you made into the song name. I like the lyrics and music but not the singing so much. I thought the singing was bland.
#4
OK, Tnx for the comment,
Is it the accent that sound bad or the singing at all?

*Do you hear the accent?
#5
the accent is thick. It's not that the singing is bad its just like kinda boring. The video was good and the lyrics and music though
#6
Thanks for the honest comment, i'll work on my singing.

more comments please?
#10
Agreed with Meli2235 on this. accent isn't a problem, it can be used to one's advantage.

I'd also advice you to read the rules. it's not really fair to keep bumping your threads by asking for comments.
The best way to get comments on your stuff, is to first start commenting on others stuff.
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My beginner rig:

Epiphone Goth G-400 SG
Line 6 Spider IV (Don't judge me, I was young and stupid)
Stagg SW203N
Yamaha APX500
#13
Thank you, this is the best english I can do...

I try to work on the accent, but maybe it's better not to fight with my voice
#14
I thought it was beautiful, made me cry.

Just try to sing like a black guy next time you do one of your songs.

Hope this helps.
#15
WOOW, "made me cry.", I'm happy(In the good way...don't cry...)

But I didn't understand "Just try to sing like a black guy" ?

Tnx
#16
Quote by AmirMaor
WOOW, "made me cry.", I'm happy(In the good way...don't cry...)

But I didn't understand "Just try to sing like a black guy" ?

Tnx


The Beatles did it, Elvis did it & The Rolling Stones did it and they made a lot of money, a lot of these guys emulated James Brown & Ottis Redding, but your songwriting is there man, I love your lyrical ability.

Hopefully we see more soon, cheers till next time buddy.
#17
Good stuff,i note you have mentioned on my songs
that they are too short,well yours is too,as you repeat
the chorus 3 times to spin it out.
Doesn`t matter how long it is,you just proved it
great effort!
#18
lol, you're right, but I have a reason... very bad English

But yhh, It really doesn't matter.

and Tnx
#20
Quote by AmirMaor
Thank you, this is the best english I can do...

I try to work on the accent, but maybe it's better not to fight with my voice

I actually really like the accent, it makes the song more unique, in my opinion
#21
Quote by AmirMaor
NewDayHappy - where I can hear something of you?


When I post something, you'll be the first one to know.

I doubt I could match your lyrical ability though, absolutely loved this song.

Thanks Amir.