#1
With eyes the color of honey
On a hot sunny day
Makes me stutter
And my stomach flutter
You melted my heart
From the very start

My heart is on a string
That only you control
Don't let me go
Don't let it fall
Or I will lose it all

Your smile so wide
Trying to stop a grin
You slowly drew me in
With a smile so cute
My voice goes mute
And my mind goes blank

My heart is on a string
That only you control
Don't let me go
Don't let it fall
Or I will lose it all
#2
Quote by Meli2235
With eyes the color of honey
On a hot sunny day
Makes me stutter
And my stomach flutter
You melted my heart
From the very start

My heart is on a string
That only you control
Don't let me go
Don't let it fall
Or I will lose it all

Your smile so wide
Trying to stop a grin
You slowly drew me in
With a smile so cute
My voice goes mute
And my mind goes blank

My heart is on a string
That only you control
Don't let me go
Don't let it fall
Or I will lose it all


I don't really want to come across as a mean a'hole, but most things you've posted are pretty cheesy love songs.
Nothing wrong with that though, it's probably totally you, and you should be happy with what yo uwrite.
To me it's just really generic pop(rock) stuff you seem to write.

Don't take me to seriously though. I'm no genius at writing lyrics, and I too have written these kind of cheesy lyrics.
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My beginner rig:

Epiphone Goth G-400 SG
Line 6 Spider IV (Don't judge me, I was young and stupid)
Stagg SW203N
Yamaha APX500
#3
2 of them aren't love songs at all. and some are break-up songs. Not all love songs.
#4
Quote by Meli2235
2 of them aren't love songs at all. and some are break-up songs. Not all love songs.


Break-ups are related to love though ;-)
My Soundcloud

My beginner rig:

Epiphone Goth G-400 SG
Line 6 Spider IV (Don't judge me, I was young and stupid)
Stagg SW203N
Yamaha APX500