It was hard to hear but your singing was pretty decent and together with the guitar was pretty good.
I'd say Get some better recording gear and make another recording so we can enjoy some more quality content
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My beginner rig:

Epiphone Goth G-400 SG
Line 6 Spider IV (Don't judge me, I was young and stupid)
Stagg SW203N
Yamaha APX500
Last edited by BjarnedeGraaf at Jan 24, 2014,