#2
Very Bloodhound Gang-ish. The intro could be much more solid. It's too loose. I'd add a second guitar and stereo mix the two of them, because this would be better with a larger sound. It's a good song with potential. THe last line "and that's how good neighbors.." is used too much. A bit distracting. Fun and interesting song though. I like your guitar tone, and the bass/drums keep the song moving. Some good rapping too.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1631744
#3
botulismbrat,
Even though I'm not typically fond of rap, the gal does a good job. Vocals come through clear. I suggest turning down the distortion a bit & double-track the rhythm guitars (and pan them left & right).........oops I didn't see that HH said the same thing for the most part. I agree the 'good neighbors' line gets repeated a bit too much. Good job overall. Perhaps you could review my music: done by a white guy, with 'black vocals' at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1630629
Last edited by aaron aardvark at Jan 30, 2014,