#1
This is my first song that I've actually been happy with the lyrics. I hope you all enjoy, and feedback is appreciated.

One and Only

I sleep alone and I watch the clock,
The ticking sounds, oh God, I’ve got to stop,
Thinking that everything’s gone well,
Considering the fact, that it’s all gone to Hell

I’m lying awake and I can’t understand,
Why my mind is always trying to bend,
The shapes that I see into pictures of you,
I’ve lost it all; I don’t know what to do.

I don’t know what to do.

Its months ago, that you left me now,
I’m trying to cope, but I don’t know how,
Everything I see turns into you,
I’m trying to sleep; I don’t know what to do.

I don’t know what to do.

A knock on the door or a creak in the floor,
Everything that I hear just makes me want you more,
The lack of sleep can’t keep my mind at ease,
It’s a feeling I can’t ignore,

The time that we killed so many nights alone,
Just me and you, I wish I could have shown,
You that I could have been the one and only for you,
And now that I can’t sleep, I don’t know what to do.

I don’t know what to do.

I used to think that you would never go,
But now that you’re gone, well I surely know,
That once it’s found, it’s not easily kept,
And if I knew you’d go, I wouldn’t have overslept.

A knock on the door or a creak in the floor,
Everything that I hear just makes me want you more,
The lack of sleep can’t keep my mind at ease,
It’s a feeling I can’t ignore,

The time that we killed so many nights alone,
Just me and you, I wish I could have shown,
You that I could have been the one and only for you,
And now that I can’t sleep, I don’t know what to do.

Wha-ohhh-oh
Wha-ohhh-oh
Oh-ahhhhhhh

I sleep alone and I watch the clock,
The ticking sounds, oh God, they’ve got to stop,
They’re making me want to be with you,
But I’ve lost you, oh, I don’t know what to do.

A knock on the door or a creak in the floor,
Everything that I hear just makes me want you more,
The lack of sleep can’t keep my mind at ease,
It’s a feeling I can’t ignore,

The time that we killed so many nights alone,
Just me and you, I wish I could have shown,
You that I could have been the one and only for you,
And now that I can’t sleep, I don’t know what to do.

Wha-ohhh-oh
Wha-ohhh-oh
Oh-ahhhhhhh
#2
I love it! It seems you already have the melody down aswell. You should try recording that! It's also quite good that everyone went through something like that at one point in their lives, so it's really easy to relate to. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your stuff
#4
Very good man; you have a definite style of using imagery. I can definitely imagine looking at my clock over and over