#1
Hey, I recorded some songs over the summer and figured I could post it here. I play all the instruments and the songs I wrote. When you go to the soundcloud profile, listen to the last song on the list called howd you do it, ryan? This is the first song I recorded and is my favorite. It's posted on the engineers soundcloud. I have three other songs on there, and they all say they are by Alex. I will critique your song in return. Thank you


Soundcloud.com/freakmech
#2
The overall instrumentation is good. However, I find that you drop pitch a lot in the vocals. So tighten up the vocals... but when the vocals are tight I found it very enjoyable sans the guitar solo which sounded too tiny and thin and didn't fit into the track in the same way that everything else did.