Not bad at all for a first song! Power metal sounding, it fit the pictures lol some parts were off time (mostly with the arpeggios) but everything else sounds clean to me. Good choice of riffs Tone is good. Drums start a bit awkward sounding but when the guitar comes in it makes sense. THe drums get repetitive after though. You should try switching them up a bit without sacrificing the guitar riffs power, i'm positive there are ways to do that. All in all you have a very good foundation. Good job, keep it up!
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Thanks alot guys!
I made the drums with a programme called Beatcraft, and I recorded guitars and keyboards with Audacity. I really appreciate the feedback!
As long as you can keep track of what you are doing, i'm sure it will turn out great!