#2
Guitar tone is really thin, you need to work on that and probably add bass as well. Right now it feels like it should be on Soundcloud as a demo and not on bandcamp as an actual song, even if it is labelled 'demo'.
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#3
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Guitar tone is really thin, you need to work on that and probably add bass as well. Right now it feels like it should be on Soundcloud as a demo and not on bandcamp as an actual song, even if it is labelled 'demo'.


Was looking more for feedback on the song itself, not the production value. Thanks for trying though.
#4
I really like it.
Songwriting wise, i can hear the space that's been left for vocals. Everything works well together.
I think it's got a lot of potential and it's a strong foundation for working on.

I can definitely hear the Deftones influence.