Keep trying you say
You claim its gonna be okay
But we both know it was just a game (To you)
Kept my hopes, oh, really high
You've lost my trust, I've lost my time
I did, but I wont let this happen
No, i wont let this happen, again.

Hey, its just a part of this song I'm writting and i just wanted to know what you people think about it, its the first song I've ever written. Also its supposed to be an alt rock-metal song.