#1
Call it cliche, call it "just another love song"...well it came from my heart...honest opinions please


Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Without you
My life starts to rust...
Away...

Promises broken
Bridges were burned
But I was the one
To turn...
Away...
Away...


So Here I am
Waiting for you
To turn around
And ask me to stay
Don't go away...

Through good times
And bad
We always had
Each other's backs
So please...
When you leave...
Remember me...


A month gone by
And I still struggle
Not to cry
When I hear your voice
Your beautiful voice...

Someday I'll feel fine
And I'll forget
That your not mine...
But today is the same
As every one else
I still feel the pain...
And it won't go away...


Now Here I am
Waiting for you
To call me
And ask me to stay
Don't go away...

Through good times
And bad
We always had
Each other's backs
So please...
Remember that...


My pride won't let me show
That I don't want to go
Alone
Anymore...

I'm so tired of missing you
And I just can't think
Of a single thing to do...
That won't have me
Thinking of you...

I should have held on to...you...

So Here I am
Waiting for you
To call me
And ask me to stay
Don't go away...

Through good times
And bad
We always had
Each other's backs
So please...
Remember that...

So please...
My dear...
Remember me...
"One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain."- Bob Marley
#2
I typically don't like cliche love songs, but for some reason I enjoyed this. Keep it up man.
#3
yeah i know its kind of cliche but it just flowed out when i wrote it, it was painful..
"One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain."- Bob Marley
#4
It was still good though. It's pretty difficult to write a love song that doesn't sound cliche.

I hope you feel better man.
#5
thank you
"One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain."- Bob Marley