#1
In the night she rolls over
Nothing to see here
Out her eye rolls a tear
Another night another lover
A feeling so damn insincere
Swallowed up in her own fear

She doesn't really feel
She can't believe this is real

She's been waiting for this moment
Before getting laid
Demanding to be paid
Another night another lover
Another fifty dollar bill
Already spent on pills

She doesn't really feel
She can't believe this is real

She puts on high heeled boots
She's a walker of the night
Hiding in plain sight
Another night another lover
Another john behind the wheel
Looking for a deal

She doesn't really feel
She can't believe this is real

She meets him at the corner
Of an hourly hotel
Safe as she can tell
Another night another lover
With some duct tape and some rope
Her parents had such high hopes

She doesn't really feel
She can't believe this is real
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#2
Good job. I've never seen a song talk about prostitution in this way before. It's interesting.
#3
I am conflicted on the ending. Turned really dark with the rope and duct tape. I have this vision of this character in my head and wrote only to stumble into her demise at the end?

But it is meant to be a sort of build up song. Really quiet at the beginning and loud at the end. Similar to Insect Kin from Bush or Villains by the Verve Pipe (probably to similar to Villains).
Epi G400 '66 Reissue
w/ Airline Vintage Voiced Single Coil Pickups
Last edited by Killsocket at Feb 26, 2014,
#4
Quote by Killsocket
I am conflicted on the ending. Turned really dark with the rope and duct tape. I have this vision of this character in my head and wrote only to stumble into her demise at the end?

But it is meant to be a sort of build up song. Really quiet at the beginning and loud at the end. Similar to Insect Kin from Bush or Villains by the Verve Pipe (probably to similar to Villains).


I wouldn't have put that in.
You probably should have stopped before that last verse, or build it up more.
It felt like it escalated very quickly.
Apart from that, it was a fine song.
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#5
Quote by BjarnedeGraaf
I wouldn't have put that in.
You probably should have stopped before that last verse, or build it up more.
It felt like it escalated very quickly.
Apart from that, it was a fine song.



Thanks for the review. I am really considering removing the end and, as you said, expand on it.
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