#1
Making rings around my eyelids
Waiting to see the truth
I can't believe that I can see at all
My dreams, I'll raise them on a flag
Only to be pushed down
Maybe I want to be pushed down

Cause I'm just broken
Keep me out of my way
Cause I want your attention
And I don't understand it
Hold me close, and tell me a story
Cause whatever I am saying, I am saying the wrong things
I'm just an enemy, I am the perfect one for me

The little things haunting me through the night
Solely sitting on a stool in the blankest of black
Rooms, hoping to wake up one day
and find out Goddess Grace
Has taken me today
Well nothing's ever gonna change

Cause I'm just broken
Keep me out of my way
Cause I want your attention
And I don't understand it
Hold me close, and tell me a story
Cause whatever I am saying, I am saying the wrong things
I'm just an enemy, I am the perfect one for me

Give me one last chance to make things right
I'll never hurt you, I'll never harm you
More than I will right now
Rubies drip from your eyes
Smother me in satin
Sheets.
And take me out here blind
#2
So many excellent stanzas, but it lacks a certain element of poppiness. I like songs that are catchy and rhyme, I understand that's not what you were going for, though.

I'd recommend the title being changed to "Enemy" just so it's a little bit more catchy.