#1
*is violent. Much warning. C4C*

The stream rushed into the plastic bowl.
It splattered among the contents in there.
Mother did something different this mo(u)rn.
That awful sound seared through my ears:

Snap. Crackle. Pop.
Snap. Crackle. Pop.

Why, mom? Why torture me this way?
What did I do to deserve this gavage?
My hearts tears from the red, into the grey.
I fill with anger first then fear and tears ravage.

Snap. Crackle. Pop.
Snap. Crackle. Pop.

“Eat it.” She almost sounds genuine.
-Well- genuine with love and care;
Not genuine about the intention
to harm me in a most horrible snare.

Snap. Crackle. Pop.
Snap. Crackle. Pop.

Each sound signifies one more second
Of a deteriorating heart.
I look up in time to see her beckon;
“This is the best dish on my carte.”

Snap. Crackle. Pop.
Snap. Crackle. Pop.

In defiance, I lift my chest.
Handcuffs strangle my wrists and pause my motion.
Swift mother, mommy dearest
Grabs my hair and ends the commotion.

Snap. Crackle. Pop.
Snap. Crackle. Pop.
Snap. Crackle. Pop.
Snap. Crackle. Pop.

I am upset by the lack of silence
This cauldron in front of me never stops
At the mercy of a tyrant, Ms. Highness
And my head drops

My nose pushes the remnants of father’s heart
Further into the hydrochloric acid.

Snap!
My eyes bulge out of their sockets.
Raw pain seeped through my skin.
Crackle!
My lips chipped off my face.
Disappeared into the reddish liquid.
I feel each solitary skin cell drift
Further into death.
My thoughts lack thought.
My eardrums
Enter the liquid
With one
Last
Pop!
Last edited by 21wickwing at Mar 11, 2014,
#2
Haha sick! Is there a deeper meaning, or is it more literal like a cannibal corpse type of thing?
"I am alone. Goddamn. That shit hurts sometimes, but I realize what I am, what I have become. The alien man waved his arms up and down and noticed that he couldn't wave in the right language so he stopped."
#4
Vivid. And I learned a new word, "Gavage."

Brought some disturbing visuals. Got me a little tense at my work desk. Nice work!