That's really good! I listened to the whole thing. Yeah, it's pretty sloppy in some parts, but just do a clean recording of that and it'll be great. It sticks to the standard easycore pop punk sound, but I don't have a problem with that. If you plan on putting vocals in there, it's really a make or break thing. So good luck with that. It's an awesome sound but it would suck to see it wasted because of bad singing or bad lyrics.

Mind checking out my song? It's not easycore, but it's pop punk too, so I'd appreciate reading your thoughts on it: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1636368