#1
C4C, meaning is pretty obvious. The writing style is supposed to be off kelter and very short, leaving a very basic point to build many different imagery off of.

Monkey see, and monkey do,
I'm not phased,
in love with you,
I don't mind, because I don't have to,
I don't care, it's all their after.

Little people all in line, I wanna see you beg,
Little people all in iine, I wanna see you beg.
Like a little God!
Like a little God!
Like a little God!

Monkey see and monkey do,
I'm not even in love with you,
I don't mind, because I don't have to,
I don't care, it's all their after.
Decepticons everywhere, decepticons everywhere.
#3
This was good. I can't really think of anything you could add. I really liked the second stanza and how aggressive it is.
Last edited by Aoh legend at Mar 30, 2014,