#1
"Temptations"

I can feel it
Feel the darkness coming over me
Trapped in a room
Tempting me to try to bleed

Trapped in here by myself
Guns, knives, ropes, and pills
Gotta push it all away
Gotta push it all away
This room is my hell
There's no clear way out
Trying to get out of here
Trying to get out of here

Even now when I
Can see the way out
Lack of chemicals
Keep me locked up in hell

I am all alone
In this room on my own
I try to break free
From dangers that tempt me

What the hell is wrong with me
Losing all my sanity

And I can't take this anymore
What the hell is wrong with me
Picturing the blood drip on the floor
Dear God, can somebody save me

Darkness coming over me
Tempting me to try to bleed
Why am I such a freak
Dear God, please save me

Even now when I
Can see the way out
Lack of chemicals
Keep me locked up in hell

I am all alone
In this room on my own
I try to break free
From dangers that tempt me

What the hell is wrong with me
Losing all my sanity

And I can't take this anymore
What the hell is wrong with me
Picturing the blood drip on the floor
Dear God, can somebody save me

I can't stand the lack of chemicals
Causing this darkness to creep in
Dear God, can somebody save me
Before I move into insanity

Gotta push it all away
Gotta push it all away
Last edited by Aoh legend at Mar 18, 2014,
#2
You're tearing me apart, Lisa!
Please let me keep this memory, just this one ..
#4
How was work today?

Oh, pretty good. We got a new client and the bank will make a lot of money.

What client?

I cannot tell you; it's confidential.

Aw, come on. Why not?

No, I can't. Anyway, how is your sex life?
#5
i'm guessing this was inspired by a movie or tv show or something.

anyway i really liked this piece.
I just want to know that I did all I could with what I was given.
#6
Quote by mr.******
i'm guessing this was inspired by a movie or tv show or something.

anyway i really liked this piece.

I'm glad you liked it, but it was not inspired by a movie, TV show, or anything like that.

And did I do something that caused these weird replies?
#7
Quote by Aoh legend
I'm glad you liked it, but it was not inspired by a movie, TV show, or anything like that.

And did I do something that caused these weird replies?


I agree with the guy above me. this was good.

Also, the comments above were both related to a movie called "the room"

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0368226/quotes
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#8
Quote by BjarnedeGraaf
I agree with the guy above me. this was good.

Also, the comments above were both related to a movie called "the room"

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0368226/quotes

I see. I assumed it was something like that, so I renamed it. It seems I need to be a bit more careful with my titles.
Last edited by Aoh legend at Mar 18, 2014,
#10
Quote by xXxSyEdAxXx
There is no way a fifteen year-old should be capable of writing like this...

I'm going to assume that you mean that as a complement. Thanks, but I don't think it's THAT impressive however.
#11
Quote by Aoh legend
I'm going to assume that you mean that as a complement. Thanks, but I don't think it's THAT impressive however.


You're welcome, but it really did seem that impressive to me.