#1
Driving, along a lonely and misguided carriageway
Looking for some holy spiritual guidance
But missing the point of the carriageway's purpose

Floating
In a fishbowl, with my earphones
Listening to a cassette from the 1990s

Flung some money in a the purse of a beggar
The streets don't seem so pretty today
The homeless guys really don't help create a pictureesque scene

And so we're still meandering through this void of nothing
To get to B&Q, Argos, Tesco and Ikea
Before they all close their doors
and leave us on the scrap heap again
The king stay the king
#2
Not sure that "carriageway" is a word that needs to be said twice in the same verse.
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#3
Or even once for that matter. I don't think I've ever used that word in a sentence.

Carriageway... it just feels kind of chubby on my tongue.
#4
Yeah, I was going to say that, but ughhh.
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#7
Good writing style, but I have also the same opinionm as the others said. But in total, its nice
#8
Seems to me like you used "expensive" word just to show your ability to do so.
There are other words that mean the same that could've fit better here.

Overall it's good though.
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