I'm trying to start an online metal band with a couple people I've talked to online and the other guitarist wants song of the songs in GP6 format.

I'm having a real hard time putting note values to each note. No matter what I think the note values are the tab just sounds wrong.

To me I count it as 4/4 at 65bpm
2 8th
2 16th
1 dotted 8th

But I am starting to get really frustrated. Is there anyone who can help me out by taking a listen to this short snippet. The first riff is the one I can count.

I guess how I thought to count was wrong(haven't had to use any type of theory in 3 or 4 years).

Where could I find more info on how to write rhythm?
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Last edited by Kyleisthename at Mar 25, 2014,