Apprehensive apparitions, yet arising since...always
Becoming bolder (more belligerent)

Conversational Canines

Definitely defying direct orders now
Explainable extraction executed (whispered lucid me)

Going, Going...go/

Helplessly Hapless
I am the mayor however, the mayor is I

Kimono King, Krispy Kreme, Serene, Scream (help, I am under here)

My mind is my militia (in the war against my phrends)
'No, our mind'

ous for the silence now

'Rape her.'

Unknown origin underlying the diagnosis
View:, distort/on, del.usions :- o-f grandyur


Y me? (Y now.)
this is kinda sick, i like it
Nerdo-sez-bo wrote:

Bon Jovi can just **** off really.

Life is one big question when your starin at the clock
And the answers always waiting at the liquor store, 40 oz to Freedom
Fun and haunting, like schizo"phrendly"a! It's hard to associate with the very end, except that I know those symbols have an integrated meaning with this fragmentation of what seems like an alternative perspective, a filtered part of reality that is encoded in synchronistic moments. It's like you're trying to make us aware of a cosmic puzzle you've stumbled on.
hmmm, this feels like experimentation for the sake of experimentation. The techniques you're using become the focus of the piece and the only real substance is inferred from these: I guess I'm struggling to get much direction from this.

Don't get me wrong I enjoyed reading this, but I think you could use these techniques more effectively by drawing more links.

Part of the reason I say this is that when I find myself writing like this it tends to be a stepping stone, and a confidence builder, into applying the techniques in my other writing. It is a necessary exercise nonetheless.

It was an enjoyable read anyway man.