#1
behold the eyes, they're smitten behind
the smouldering stare
the stare she's got there
until the tide takes over her tongue
she's folding her smile
scolding her thumbs

perturbed, her lips bow downwards to grip
her brow keeps descending
she's gonna ad-lib
in front of her eyes the shells become shocked
she's bitterly beating
us up with her looks

she snaps the evening
into two

oh why did you wake us up?
why did you wake us up?
if you were only gonna throw me the sodding book
why did you wake us up?

the truth's in her hands, hidden from view
she's outwardly putting
the point into view
mascara is running and her cheeks are in bloom
the music gets niche
and we're left alone in the room

she snaps the evening
in two

oh why did you wake us up?
why did you wake us up?
if you were only gonna throw me the sodding book
why did you wake us up?

we were just sitting over there
problematising the come-on
when you turned heads
and then you said what sounded like...

she snaps the evening
she snaps the evening
she snaps the evening
she snaps the evening


#3
does this style have a name? because I quite love it.
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#4
Haha, cheers. You lot love a good metre. I knew this was the snappiest thing I'd written in about five years.

I'm pretty sure there's no exact style, I've been writing this way since the join date under my name. The chorus is utter balls but the verses clicked nicely.

Also, nice to see the secret council still read lyrics ha. Though I'm pretty sure myself and Alex (Skagitup) are like the only two lyricists to get picked up here.

Cheers.