i really disliked the left heavy vocal its too quiet and too far left try panning it's send to the right to balance the mix.
also i found the mix a bit too quiet.
other than that, a nice lil indie vibe going there.
I actually quite liked the low quality dreariness of it, it added a certain charm which I thought was quite appropriate for the style e.g. like it would be playing in he background of a film scene where everyone is at a party and tripping hard.
That was hella chill. Sounds like a band I found on band camp called the Frights, check em out.