#1
Hey guys, here's a short sample from another song I am working on with Dayviewer. This one has some great cleans that remind me a lot of Scar Symmetry! Let me know what you guys think!


https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/13321068/Sweetly%20Dreaming.mp3

Lyrics:

Singing softly, into the night’s sky,
dreaming that I’ll never die,
forego the fate that makes me who I am,
begin life again!

I told you what it would take to get me to fake,
and yet you still choose to break,
for the love of God and for my sake,
it’s you that I can’t shake,
don’t leave me in this wake!

I hear the whispers, but can it be true,
destroying everything I thought of you,
no temptation to submit to,
I always thought of you

Sweetly dreaming of these memories,
sweetly singing of this misery
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#2
This was excellent!
Not sure if I think the music and voice timbre don't match or if it just needs to be mixed better.
#3
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This was excellent!
Not sure if I think the music and voice timbre don't match or if it just needs to be mixed better.


Could you elaborate further?
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#4
There was some kind of dissonance between the music/voice. I'm not very adept at analyzing, sorry, this is just my opinion.