#2
Really beautiful composition! The only part I wasn't a big fan of was past the minute and a half mark the chugs get kind of old, but that's probably just me, I'm not big on chugs to begin with. I enjoyed the amount of change ups, enough to keep it interesting
Last edited by geigercou1 at Apr 7, 2014,
#3
Not a bad composition, reminds me of Nightwish with some power metal elements. It's a little too ambient for my tastes, but if it was on the radio I wouldn't change it.

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#5
Hey, overall good.
I felt like at minute 4, however, where the music stops that it was like a "drop" from dubstep. I really think that's when the music should have exploded, however, it kept the slow pace after that point.
If this song is in the context of a rock opera layout, however, I don't know how it fits into the other parts of the opera and thus I could totally be wrong.
I give it a 7/10. Good job, man!
#6
Quote by geigercou1
Really beautiful composition! The only part I wasn't a big fan of was past the minute and a half mark the chugs get kind of old, but that's probably just me, I'm not big on chugs to begin with. I enjoyed the amount of change ups, enough to keep it interesting


I did think about cutting the intro a bit shorter but decided to leave it as it was!

It was basically 4 ideas thrown together as one song but I think it turned out ok
#7
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Not a bad composition, reminds me of Nightwish with some power metal elements. It's a little too ambient for my tastes, but if it was on the radio I wouldn't change it.

C4C?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1639689


hey man, Nightwish are one of my fav bands so pleased you could hear them in my music a bit I usually write hard rocking tunes so I was happy to bring the volume down on this one
#8
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Hey, overall good.
I felt like at minute 4, however, where the music stops that it was like a "drop" from dubstep. I really think that's when the music should have exploded, however, it kept the slow pace after that point.
If this song is in the context of a rock opera layout, however, I don't know how it fits into the other parts of the opera and thus I could totally be wrong.
I give it a 7/10. Good job, man!


I wanted an acoustic solo section in there just to spice things up a bit - I think it fitted in well but can see your point about perhaps needing to up the drama at that point